IELTS Writing for Candidates aiming for Band 7: How to Fix The wrong tone in a General Training letter

Decide on the recipient first: formal for an unknown person or official, semi-formal for a manager or neighbour, informal for a friend. Keep greeting, vocabulary and closing consistent with that choice throughout the letter.

At a glance

For: Candidates aiming for Band 7
Problem: The wrong tone in a General Training letter
Scoring criterion: Task Achievement (Task 1 letter)
Task affected: Task 1 (General Training letter)
IELTS test: Academic or General Training (check your requirement)
Typical effort: about one week
First step: Read the prompt to identify who the recipient is and what the relationship is.

Why this happens to candidates aiming for Band 7

Letter tone is part of the Task Achievement criterion. Candidates mix formal and informal language, for example 'Dear Sir' followed by contractions and slang, which signals weak control of register.

Why this affects candidates aiming for Band 7: preparation covers many topics but few criteria in depth.

Develop two ideas fully instead of listing four.

A strength to build on: A clear target allows a criterion-based plan from the start.

Fix it in four steps

Read the prompt to identify who the recipient is and what the relationship is.
Choose the greeting and sign-off that match (Dear Sir or Madam / Yours faithfully, or Dear Anna / Best wishes).
Keep vocabulary consistent: avoid contractions in formal letters and avoid stiff phrases in informal ones.
Reread the first and last lines to check they match in tone.

Before and after

Before

Dear Sir, Hi, I'm writing because my washing machine is rubbish, thanks.

After

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about a washing machine I purchased from your store last month.

Ten-minute drill: Write the first and last two lines of three letters with different recipients and compare the register.

Questions and answers

How can candidates aiming for Band 7 fix the wrong tone in a General Training letter?

How long does it take candidates aiming for Band 7 to fix the wrong tone in a General Training letter?

Most learners need about one week. Plan six to ten weeks if your current band is 6, and use weekly feedback cycles.

Do I use the name or Sir or Madam?

Use the name if the prompt gives one, with 'Yours sincerely'. If not, use 'Dear Sir or Madam' with 'Yours faithfully'.

Can I use contractions in a letter?

In informal letters yes. In formal or semi-formal letters, avoid them.

What does a good practice drill look like for candidates aiming for Band 7?

Write the first and last two lines of three letters with different recipients and compare the register. Plan six to ten weeks if your current band is 6, and use weekly feedback cycles.

How can candidates aiming for Band 7 tell they have fixed the wrong tone in a General Training letter?

A reader can tell the relationship to the recipient from the first sentence and the tone stays the same to the end.

What should candidates aiming for Band 7 know about their IELTS Writing target?

A Band 7 Writing score needs a clear position, well-developed ideas, logical progression and mostly error-free sentences.

Should candidates aiming for Band 7 practise this on Task 1, Task 2 or both?

This is a Task 1 issue for the General Training letter. Practise it on real letter prompts within about 20 minutes, then move on to Task 2. A clear target allows a criterion-based plan from the start.

Can an AI checker help candidates aiming for Band 7 with the wrong tone in a General Training letter?

An AI checker can show where this pattern appears in your own essay and which criterion it affects, which makes the fix concrete. It gives a practice estimate, not an official IELTS score, so use it to choose the next revision, rewrite, and check again. The first check on this site is free.

Check your own essay

See where the wrong tone in a General Training letter appears in your own writing and which criterion it affects, then rewrite the weakest paragraph.

Run a free first check

Feedback is a practice estimate, not an official IELTS score. Last reviewed 2026-11-11. Score requirements change, so confirm them with the organisation that will read your result.