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IELTS Writing for Chinese speakers: How to Fix Run-on sentences and comma splices

Never join two full sentences with only a comma. Use a full stop, a semicolon, or a conjunction such as 'and', 'but' or 'because'. Check each sentence for one subject-verb core and clear punctuation.

At a glance

For
Chinese speakers
Problem
Run-on sentences and comma splices
Scoring criterion
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Task affected
Task 1 and Task 2
IELTS test
Academic or General Training (check your requirement)
Typical effort
one to two weeks
First step
Mark every sentence that has more than two verbs and check how its parts are joined.

Why this happens to Chinese speakers

Long sentences feel advanced, but without correct joins they become run-ons. Punctuation is part of Grammatical Range and Accuracy, and frequent comma splices are a typical Band 6 error.

Why this affects Chinese speakers: Chinese has no articles and no verb tense endings, and sentences are often joined by commas, so these patterns carry into English writing.

Articles, tense and plural endings are common errors, and comma splices are frequent.

A strength to build on: Strong exam discipline and wide study vocabulary help with practice routines.

Fix it in four steps

  1. Mark every sentence that has more than two verbs and check how its parts are joined.
  2. If two full sentences meet at a comma, change it to a full stop or add a conjunction.
  3. Break any sentence longer than about 30 words into two.
  4. Read the essay aloud and mark where you need to breathe, which is often where punctuation is missing.

Before and after

Before

Many people drive to work, the roads are crowded, this causes pollution.

After

Many people drive to work, so the roads are crowded, and this causes pollution.

Ten-minute drill: Find ten long sentences in your old essays and rewrite each as two correct sentences or one correctly joined sentence.

Questions and answers

How can Chinese speakers fix run-on sentences and comma splices?

Never join two full sentences with only a comma. Use a full stop, a semicolon, or a conjunction such as 'and', 'but' or 'because'. Check each sentence for one subject-verb core and clear punctuation. Articles, tense and plural endings are common errors, and comma splices are frequent.

How long does it take Chinese speakers to fix run-on sentences and comma splices?

Most learners need one to two weeks. Consistent short daily practice with feedback works better than long, infrequent sessions.

What is a comma splice?

Two complete sentences joined by only a comma. It is a common punctuation error and easy to fix with a full stop or conjunction.

Is a very long sentence ever a problem?

Yes, if it is hard to follow or poorly punctuated. Clear sentences of moderate length are safer than long, uncertain ones.

What does a good practice drill look like for Chinese speakers?

Find ten long sentences in your old essays and rewrite each as two correct sentences or one correctly joined sentence. Consistent short daily practice with feedback works better than long, infrequent sessions.

How can Chinese speakers tell they have fixed run-on sentences and comma splices?

A punctuation check finds no comma splices in your last two essays.

What should Chinese speakers know about their IELTS Writing target?

Chinese-speaking candidates often have strong reading and vocabulary knowledge and need targeted work on English-specific grammar and organisation.

Should Chinese speakers practise this on Task 1, Task 2 or both?

It shows up in both tasks. Fix it in Task 2 first, because Task 2 carries about twice the weight of Task 1, then check Task 1 with the same checklist. Strong exam discipline and wide study vocabulary help with practice routines.

Can an AI checker help Chinese speakers with run-on sentences and comma splices?

An AI checker can show where this pattern appears in your own essay and which criterion it affects, which makes the fix concrete. It gives a practice estimate, not an official IELTS score, so use it to choose the next revision, rewrite, and check again. The first check on this site is free.

Check your own essay

See where run-on sentences and comma splices appears in your own writing and which criterion it affects, then rewrite the weakest paragraph.

Feedback is a practice estimate, not an official IELTS score. Last reviewed 2026-11-11. Score requirements change, so confirm them with the organisation that will read your result.

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