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IELTS Writing for IELTS retakers: How to Fix Run-on sentences and comma splices

Never join two full sentences with only a comma. Use a full stop, a semicolon, or a conjunction such as 'and', 'but' or 'because'. Check each sentence for one subject-verb core and clear punctuation.

At a glance

For
IELTS retakers
Problem
Run-on sentences and comma splices
Scoring criterion
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Task affected
Task 1 and Task 2
IELTS test
Academic or General Training (check your requirement)
Typical effort
one to two weeks
First step
Mark every sentence that has more than two verbs and check how its parts are joined.

Why this happens to IELTS retakers

Long sentences feel advanced, but without correct joins they become run-ons. Punctuation is part of Grammatical Range and Accuracy, and frequent comma splices are a typical Band 6 error.

Why this affects IELTS retakers: preparation repeats the same methods, so the same weaknesses return.

The same recurring errors appear essay after essay.

A strength to build on: A previous score report shows which criterion was lowest.

Fix it in four steps

  1. Mark every sentence that has more than two verbs and check how its parts are joined.
  2. If two full sentences meet at a comma, change it to a full stop or add a conjunction.
  3. Break any sentence longer than about 30 words into two.
  4. Read the essay aloud and mark where you need to breathe, which is often where punctuation is missing.

Before and after

Before

Many people drive to work, the roads are crowded, this causes pollution.

After

Many people drive to work, so the roads are crowded, and this causes pollution.

Ten-minute drill: Find ten long sentences in your old essays and rewrite each as two correct sentences or one correctly joined sentence.

Questions and answers

What is the fastest way for IELTS retakers to fix run-on sentences and comma splices?

Never join two full sentences with only a comma. Use a full stop, a semicolon, or a conjunction such as 'and', 'but' or 'because'. Check each sentence for one subject-verb core and clear punctuation. The same recurring errors appear essay after essay.

How long does it take IELTS retakers to fix run-on sentences and comma splices?

Most learners need one to two weeks. Retake windows are costly, so treat each practice essay as evidence, not as a lottery.

What is a comma splice?

Two complete sentences joined by only a comma. It is a common punctuation error and easy to fix with a full stop or conjunction.

Is a very long sentence ever a problem?

Yes, if it is hard to follow or poorly punctuated. Clear sentences of moderate length are safer than long, uncertain ones.

What does a good practice drill look like for IELTS retakers?

Find ten long sentences in your old essays and rewrite each as two correct sentences or one correctly joined sentence. Retake windows are costly, so treat each practice essay as evidence, not as a lottery.

How can IELTS retakers tell they have fixed run-on sentences and comma splices?

A punctuation check finds no comma splices in your last two essays.

What should IELTS retakers know about their IELTS Writing target?

Retakers need to find out why Writing did not move last time, because repeating the same practice usually produces the same score.

Should IELTS retakers practise this on Task 1, Task 2 or both?

It shows up in both tasks. Fix it in Task 2 first, because Task 2 carries about twice the weight of Task 1, then check Task 1 with the same checklist. A previous score report shows which criterion was lowest.

Can an AI checker help IELTS retakers with run-on sentences and comma splices?

An AI checker can show where this pattern appears in your own essay and which criterion it affects, which makes the fix concrete. It gives a practice estimate, not an official IELTS score, so use it to choose the next revision, rewrite, and check again. The first check on this site is free.

Check your own essay

See where run-on sentences and comma splices appears in your own writing and which criterion it affects, then rewrite the weakest paragraph.

Feedback is a practice estimate, not an official IELTS score. Last reviewed 2026-11-11. Score requirements change, so confirm them with the organisation that will read your result.

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