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IELTS Discussion Essay Example

Should volunteering be made compulsory for all young people? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

234 words
33 minutes
Example response

Key Features

  • Balanced discussion with clear personal opinion
  • Ethical and practical arguments
  • Academic vocabulary
  • Sophisticated structures

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Sample Essay

The proposal to mandate community service for all young people has sparked debate about the balance between civic responsibility and individual freedom. While mandatory volunteering could increase participation in charitable activities, I believe it fundamentally contradicts the spirit of volunteerism and should not be compulsory.

Proponents of mandatory service argue that it instills a sense of civic duty and social responsibility in young people who might otherwise remain self-focused. They contend that requiring volunteer work ensures all youth develop empathy, understand social issues, and contribute to their communities. Furthermore, compulsory programs could address staffing shortages in essential services such as elder care, environmental conservation, and literacy programs that rely heavily on volunteer support.

However, opponents raise valid objections about the nature of compelled service. True volunteering stems from genuine altruism and personal choice—forcing young people to serve undermines the very values such programs aim to cultivate. Additionally, mandatory volunteers may lack motivation and commitment, potentially providing lower quality service than willing participants. There are also practical concerns about enforcement, monitoring, and the potential for resentment among young people who feel their autonomy is being infringed upon.

In my view, while encouraging young people to volunteer is laudable, making it compulsory transforms meaningful civic engagement into an obligation. Governments and schools should instead create attractive, well-supported volunteer opportunities that inspire genuine participation.

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Vocabulary Highlights

mandate

强制

Example use

“mandate community service”

altruism

利他主义

Example use

“genuine altruism”

undermines

破坏

Example use

“undermines the very values”

infringed

侵犯

Example use

“autonomy is being infringed”

Grammar Highlights

mandate community service for all young people (complex object)

who might otherwise remain self-focused (relative clause)

forcing young people to serve (gerund as subject)

making it compulsory transforms (gerund as subject)

Essay Structure

Introduction

Context + thesis (should not be compulsory)

Body Paragraph 1

View 1: Benefits of mandatory service

Body Paragraph 2

View 2: Undermines true volunteering, enforcement issues

Conclusion

Personal opinion + alternative approach

Illustrative notes by assessment criterion

Task Response

Sample note

Fully addresses both sides with a clear personal position.

How fully the question is answered, position is clear, ideas are developed

Coherence and Cohesion

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Logical organization. Cohesive devices used effectively.

Organization, paragraphing, and use of cohesive devices

Lexical Resource

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Wide range with sophisticated word choice.

Vocabulary range, accuracy, and appropriateness

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Sample note

Complex structures with full flexibility.

Variety and accuracy of grammatical structures

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