エッセイ例“Nowadays, many people believe that university education should be free for everyone. This essay will discuss why this could benefit society.”ビフォー“Technology is very important and it makes communication easier, but sometimes people feel lonely.”
推定バンド: 6.0最大の課題明確だが単純で一般的 — 静かにエッセイを Band 6 に留めるタイプの文。なぜ重要なのか対比が明確、語彙が強く、文法が引き締まっています。フルチェッカーがこれらの改善を文ごとに分解します。アフター“Although digital tools have made long-distance communication more accessible, an excessive reliance on online interaction can gradually weaken meaningful face-to-face relationships.”