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IELTS Body Paragraph Rewrite Examples
Ensure each example actually proves the topic sentence.
改前
For example, many students use the internet and it helps them a lot.
为什么丢分
The example is too general and does not prove the paragraph claim.
Band 7 改写方向
For instance, medical students use online journals to review recent clinical trials before ward rounds, which helps them participate more confidently in discussions.
改了什么
- specific user group
- concrete action
- linked benefit