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IELTS Introduction Rewrite Examples

Make your opening sentence state a direct, exam-ready position.

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Before

In today's world, many people discuss whether governments should fund public transport.

Why it loses marks

The introduction repeats the question without stating a position.

Band 7 direction

Governments should fund public transport because it reduces congestion and gives low-income commuters affordable access to work.

What changed

  • direct thesis
  • two supporting reasons
  • no question echo

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