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Make your opening sentence state a direct, exam-ready position.

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In today's world, many people discuss whether governments should fund public transport.

为什么丢分

The introduction repeats the question without stating a position.

Band 7 改写方向

Governments should fund public transport because it reduces congestion and gives low-income commuters affordable access to work.

改了什么

  • direct thesis
  • two supporting reasons
  • no question echo

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