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Task Response Fix Examples for IELTS Writing
Fix examples focused on answering the question with a developed position.
Before
Technology is very important in modern life.
Why it loses marks
Too general. It does not develop a clear argument.
Band 7 direction
Technology improves daily convenience, but excessive digital dependence can also make modern routines more stressful.
What changed
- clearer position
- more specific vocabulary
- stronger contrast
- less repetitive wording
Before
There are advantages and disadvantages to remote work.
Why it loses marks
The sentence avoids taking a clear position required by many Task 2 prompts.
Band 7 direction
Remote work improves flexibility for many employees, but it can weaken team cohesion when collaboration is essential.
What changed
- clear stance
- balanced development
- task-specific reasoning