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Task Response Fix Examples for IELTS Writing
Fix examples focused on answering the question with a developed position.
改前
Technology is very important in modern life.
为什么丢分
Too general. It does not develop a clear argument.
Band 7 改写方向
Technology improves daily convenience, but excessive digital dependence can also make modern routines more stressful.
改了什么
- clearer position
- more specific vocabulary
- stronger contrast
- less repetitive wording
改前
There are advantages and disadvantages to remote work.
为什么丢分
The sentence avoids taking a clear position required by many Task 2 prompts.
Band 7 改写方向
Remote work improves flexibility for many employees, but it can weaken team cohesion when collaboration is essential.
改了什么
- clear stance
- balanced development
- task-specific reasoning